WRITING PROFITABLE CLASSIFIED ADS
Everybody wants to make more money... In fact, most people
would like to hit upon something that makes them fabulously rich!
And seemingly, one of the easiest roads to the fulfillment of
these dreams of wealth is mail order or within the professional
circles of the business, direct mail or E-MAIL selling... For our
purposes, mail includes E-MAIL in as much as the basic principles
are one and the same.
The only thing is, hardly anyone gives much real thought tothe basic ingredient of selling by mail - the writing of profit-
able classified ads. If your mail order business is to succeed,
then you must acquire the expertise of writing classified ads that
sell your product or services!
So what makes a classified ad good or bad? First of all, itmust appeal to the reader, and as such, it must say exactly what
you want it to say. Secondly, it has to say what it says in the
least possible number of words in order to keep your operating
costs within your budget. And thirdly, it has to produce the
desired results in the form of inquiries or sales.
Grabbing the reader's attention is your first objective. Youmust assume the reader is "scanning" the page on which your ad
appears in the company of two or three hundred classified ads.
Therefore, there has to be something about your ad that causes him
to stop scanning and look at yours! So, the first two or three
words of your ad are of the utmost importance and deserve your
careful consideration. Most surveys show that words or phrases
that quickly involve the reader tend to be the best attention-
grabbers. Such words as: FREE... WIN... MAKE BIG MONEY...
Whatever words you use as attention-grabbers, to start yourads, you should bear in mind that they'll be competing with
similar attention-grabbers of the other ads on the same page.
Therefore, in addition to your lead words, your ad must quickly go
on to promise or state further benefits to the reader. In other
words, your ad might read something like this: MAKE BIG MONEY!
Easy & Simple. We show you how!
In the language of professional copywriters, you've grabbedthe attention of your prospect, and interested him with something
that even he can do.
The next rule of good classified copywriting has to do withthe arousal of the reader's desire to get in on your offer. In a
great many instances, this rule is by-passed, and it appears this
is the real reason that an ad doesn't pull according to the
expectations of the advertiser.
Think about it - you've got your reader's attention; you'vetold him it's easy and simple; and you're about to ask him to do
something. Unless you take the time to further "want your offer,"
your ad is going to only half turn him on. He'll compare your ad
with the others that have grabbed his attention and finally decide
upon the one that interests him the most.
What I'm saying is that here is the place for you to insertthat magic word "guaranteed" or some other such word or phrase.
So now, we've got an ad that reads: MAKE BIG MONEY! Easy &
Simple. Guaranteed!
Now the reader is turned on, and in his mind, he can't lose.You're ready to ask for his money. This is the "demand for
action" part of your ad. This is the part where you want to use
such words as: Limited offer - Act now! Write today! Only and/or
just...
Putting it all together, then your ad might read somethinglike this: MAKE BIG MONEY! Easy & Simple. Guaranteed! Limited
offer. Send $l to:
These are the ingredients of any good classified ad -Attention - Interest - Desire - Action... Without these four
ingredients skillfully integrated into your ad, chances are your
ad will just "lie there" and not do anything but cost you money.
What we've just shown you is a basic classified ad. Although such
an ad could be placed in any leading publication and would pull a
good response, it's known as a "blind ad" and would pull inquiries
and responses from a whole spectrum of people reading the
publication in which it appeared. In other words, from as many
"time-wasters" as from bona fide buyers.
So let's try to give you an example of the kind of classifiedad you might want to use, say to sell a report such as this one...
Using all the rules of basic advertising copywriting, and stating
exactly what our product is, our ad reads thusly:
MONEY-MAKER'S SECRETS! How To Write winning classifiedads. Simple & easy to learn -should double or triple your
responses. Rush $1 to BC Sales, 10 Main Anytown, TX 75001.
The point we're making is that: l) You've got to grab thereader's attention... 2) You've got to "interest him" with
something that appeals to him... 3) You've got to "further
stimulate" him with something (catch-phrase) that makes him
"desire" the product or service... 4) Demand that he act
immediately...
There's no point in being tricky or clever. Just adhere tothe basics and your profits will increase accordingly. One of the
best ways of learning to write good classified ads is to study the
classifieds - try to figure out exactly what they're attempting to
sell - and then practice rewriting them according to the rules
we've just given you. Whenever you sit down to write a
classified, always write it all out - write down everything you
want to say - and then go back over it, crossing out words, and
refining your phraseology.
The final ingredient of your classified ad is, of course, yourname and address to which the reader is to respond - where he's to
send his money or write for further information.
Generally speaking, readers respond more often to ads thatinclude a name than to those showing just initials or an address
only. However, because advertising costs are based upon the
number of words, or the amount of space your ad uses, the use of
some names in classified ads could become quite expensive. If we
were to ask our ad respondents to write to or send their money to
The Research Writers & Publishers Association, or to Book Business
Mart, or even to Money Maker's Opportunity Digest, our advertising
costs would be prohibitive. Thus we shorten our name to Researchers
or Money-Makers. The point here is to think relative to the
placement costs of your ad, and to shorten excessively long names.
The same holds true when listing your post office box number.
Shorten it to just plain Box 40, or in the case of a rural
delivery, shorten it to just RRl.
The important thing is to know the rules of profitableclassified ad writing, and to follow them. Hold your costs in
line.
Now you know the basics... The rest is up to you.Click here for all the marketing ideas and tools you'll ever need!
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